No matter how good you are, you can't really have the same precision with a tablet that you would with a pencil. What you have there would serve as a sketch (without the shading and maybe a bit less detailed). You'd do something rough like that to get the basic shapes out and then draw the final drawing on a layer on top of it. You can keep refining it and changing it as much as you want, that's the great thing about digital art.

Your line quality's not bad for a first try. Good for you for keeping loose. Most people get all uptight and their lines get all squiggly. The faster you draw, the smoother your lines, but also the less accurate you'll be. You just have to find a balance and that's the hardest part about a tablet.

Thank you for your advice. I really appreciate it.

As odd as it may seem, I like the paper its on the best.... hmmm.... but thats me, and I am an odd person, nice work, specially with the tablet